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The Fly

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The FlyMarihond
how about this idea: to carry a dead fly out of the house and set it free! is the fly an alien? aliens sure want to get their tentacles on this magical, little dead fly. why?

hope to get some constructive feedback, seems like it needs another x-factor in there, I'm not sure.
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2009-07-09 18:53:00

Author:
Marihond
Posts: 30


Very cool, funky level. I liked all the bright colours and your attention to detail was excellent! The fly in particular looked great. A couple of things to watch out for though, for one thing not much really happened in the level. I liked the way it went back and forth, each layer dissolving as you went, that was pretty cool. It would be nice if there was a bit more to it than that though. The problem is what with having to drag that fly around everywhere sackboy is pretty disabled in this level. Try making the fly out of a lighter material, or even orange floaty, just not quite enough to carry sackboy away! That way you could add some more platforming instead of just running back and forth along the ground. It's a cool idea though, and again, the visuals were amazing!
:star::star::star:
for my F4F level, click my sig.
2009-07-09 21:42:00

Author:
RadicalStan
Posts: 99


Nice level mate. I like the different enemies you take on, and the terrain was most impressive.

There were moments of slight confusion where I was unsure as to whether I should abandon my new friend They Fly. Perhaps slightly more dialogue and some puzzles could have made it a bit more interesting.

I didn't encounter any bugs (haha!) but when I reached the end of the level my fly friend was nowhere in sight so I wasn't sure if I had actually saved him / her or not. I suggest s/he thank you in some way. Make the player happy they've done a good job.

Certainly a great effort all round I reckon.

I gave it :star::star::star:
Tagged it as funky (oh yeah!)
And left a brief positive comment for you.

Please leave F4F on either of the levels in my signature below, preferably the moo co-op one if possible.
2009-07-09 22:41:00

Author:
LieutenantFatman
Posts: 465


thanx a lot, folks! will probably fix this level and check out yours on sunday.
have a smashing weekend!

2009-07-10 15:02:00

Author:
Marihond
Posts: 30


I checked this out last night and it's really different. The flies look great - cool eye technique you have there. Lots and lots of bright colors and there's just so much going on it's hard to focus on one thing at a time. People who like psychedelic levels would probably enjoy this one.

I gave it 3 stars. Thanks for sharing it.
2009-07-11 05:31:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


thanx for your feedback, Morgana! I guess this level is perfect along with some LSD, hehe...

I just added some moving parts, gas and some bats in a cage for more action. i think the flow is improved now as well, hope you enjoy it!

2009-07-13 13:25:00

Author:
Marihond
Posts: 30


Nice level mate. I like the different enemies you take on, and the terrain was most impressive.

There were moments of slight confusion where I was unsure as to whether I should abandon my new friend They Fly. Perhaps slightly more dialogue and some puzzles could have made it a bit more interesting.

I didn't encounter any bugs (haha!) but when I reached the end of the level my fly friend was nowhere in sight so I wasn't sure if I had actually saved him / her or not. I suggest s/he thank you in some way. Make the player happy they've done a good job.

Certainly a great effort all round I reckon.

I gave it :star::star::star:
Tagged it as funky (oh yeah!)
And left a brief positive comment for you.

Please leave F4F on either of the levels in my signature below, preferably the moo co-op one if possible.


thanx again, I'm going to play your Moooooooooooooooooo-level right now. but I don't have the time to comment right away as I must leave in a couple of minutes. later, mate!
2009-07-23 17:14:00

Author:
Marihond
Posts: 30


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