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Hey guys, this level was made in a couple hours one day and I am going to update it each day and make it better till I decide to make a new level. It is just another Ninja Training level! Search for my PSN name to actually find it XD PSN: Godshelp I hope you like it so far!

2009-07-07 02:17:00 Author: Godshelp Posts: 14

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I liked the gameplay of the level, but not the visuals... I recommend you make the area look more like ninja training grounds, instead of just putting down obstacles... I also recommend you use the grid, to make everything look more perfect. Also, it'd be better if you put grab switches on the sponge-with-wench parts, so you don't have to wait (it's a race after all) for it to come down.

2009-07-09 11:51:00 Author: Eldrazor Posts: 78

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I've got to agree with Eldrazor. Gameplay wise it's a fun little ninja race level, but you really need to work on the visuals. I think the suggestion of making it look like a ninja training ground is a great one - try taking a look at the Island section of the LBP Story to get some inspiration. Now, onto the specifics!: On the section with the ever-growing platforms with gas inbetween, between the third and second platforms is some material that's out of place, you might wanna clean that up The second winch sponge (the green one) doesn't come up far enough or isn't far enough over, it took me a couple of tries to get past. You can also swing left and get ontop of the thing that holds the sponges up. You should try putting some gas or a wall there, but built it into the look of your level and make it fit! The slide at the end is fun, a nice touch All I can suggest is that you perhaps make it a little longer, but it sounds like that's the plan anyway if you're going to add to it every day. You also really need to decorate it and make the look cohesive and interesting. Good luck, and I hope you have fun improving your level If you could F4F my Zombie Survival Game that'd be great, thanks.

2009-07-09 12:26:00 Author: MrOrangeOh Posts: 20

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Thanks guys, I am improving everything and I will check your level out mrorangeoh

2009-07-09 20:14:00 Author: Godshelp Posts: 14

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First off you need to change the background to the do the Dojo background. Maybe then you put some detail into it like adding stickers materials that fit the purpose of the level. Last but not least get rid of the Big UPDATED sign in the name of the level.

2009-07-09 21:33:00 Author: Mod5.0 Posts: 1576

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I had the BIG UPDATED sign because I am UPDATING it to let people know... If it is just Ninja training then it is pretty boring. I am probably going to forget it as I am working on a new level. I may continue to update but probably not...

2009-07-10 00:29:00 Author: Godshelp Posts: 14

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Okay I just played this little level and here are my comments: Gameplay wise it plays out like race levels with some obstacles. The good thing is that it works and there are no impossible areas and you never get stuck. It plays fluently. What bothered me the most in this level where the visuals. No atmosphere or even attemtp to make the level look like a ninja training environment. I suggest adding some pillars in the background, katana swords in holders or samurai outfits and some temple areas you have to walk through to get to the next training areas. This could make the level a lot better Remember if you want an extensive review for future levels please post in my review section thread F4F pick one of my best levels

2009-09-22 12:40:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422

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