Archive: 5 posts

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Hi! I'd like to participate to F4F with my best level so far! http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss144/chuck18mp/FooTown_02.jpg

2009-06-30 05:27:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712

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First off, I loved the car-enemies, I thought they were hilariously done and nicely detailed. I'm not sure if English is your first language, but the speech bubble in front of the wheel says, "This wheel remembers me a really frustrating wheel!" which doesn't quite make sense. I liked how the lighting changed to fit the mood, it went well with each progressive scene. It was really short though, there wasn't much to it after that. I think the barrier on the right that said "No Sacks Allowed" was an eye sore, it would probably be better just to use some invisible dark matter. And do you plan on expanding this, because the "Coming Soon" section at the top says you are. Overall, it didn't feel like a finished level, and considering the name ends with Version 2.2, it seems you are continuing to update it. I'll keep an eye on this one, but for now I gave it 3 stars. Be sure to check out my LittleBigMemory level for your F4F.

2009-06-30 14:51:00 Author: BSprague Posts: 2325

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Your enemies are quite imaginative and your overall level design is nice (this one was quite dark and sinister but at least the theme is kept throughout). That said the 'I just want to die bit' was quite...dark...not LBP like...and a bit random to be fair... I think you just need to improve on your level design and look, it was good but not the best I've seen. 3 stars... I'll come back and play it when (if) it updates. F4F level (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=13148)

2009-06-30 20:21:00 Author: adlingtont Posts: 321

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Your enemies are quite imaginative and your overall level design is nice (this one was quite dark and sinister but at least the theme is kept throughout). That said the 'I just want to die bit' was quite...dark...not LBP like...and a bit random to be fair... I think you just need to improve on your level design and look, it was good but not the best I've seen. 3 stars... I'll come back and play it when (if) it updates. F4F level (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=13148) I think he might have meant "I don't want to die". It makes much more sense considering the context with the vampire and whatnot, and considering the other speech bubbles, is the most probable answer.

2009-06-30 20:41:00 Author: BSprague Posts: 2325

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Hey thank you guys for the quick reviews! English is not my first language and be sure I'll fix the speech bubble or just replace it with another one... the stuck cars part will disappear(my decision is taken) I'll take all your advices and make them as best I can! *OMG! I just had a flash!!! *writing down his idea on a sheet of paper* Thank you really much again!

2009-07-01 03:36:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712

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