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Endangered

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http://i668.photobucket.com/albums/vv49/pikmin08/ImportedPhotos00003.jpg

This level is about the Sackboys they are becoming extinct and it's up to you to save them.

It takes place in the future although I didn't make it that obvious.
Robots have takin over and they are getting rid of the Sackboys you must destroy them before it's to late.

Here are some pictures....
http://i668.photobucket.com/albums/vv49/pikmin08/ImportedPhotos00002.jpg This is where the story is introduced to you.

http://i668.photobucket.com/albums/vv49/pikmin08/ImportedPhotos00001-1.jpg
This is The boss.....kinda he is actually the first enemy.

So please play it and give me your feedback.

2009-06-25 18:13:00

Author:
pikmin08

Posts: 7

This level was really fun. I hearted, gave :star::star::star::star::star:, and tagged it great. although it was kinda short.

2009-06-25 18:46:00

Author:
bbdogdude

Posts: 37

hey there.

Just got through your level and I'll be honest I only gave 2 stars as there are some issues that are easily fixable.

-There were spelling errors in speech bubbles. You have the internet to spellcheck for you. Even small errors in speech bubbles can make you level look amateurishly done

-The level was short. There were not a lot of creatures around not a lot of tech going on so your thermo must be empty. FILL THAT THING UP!

-The boss was insanely easy. All you had to do was stand behind the pillar and it wasn't able to reach you, and after killing it you could just jump off the level and hit the floor. All you had to do was add a layer of gas there and made it a little more obvious that a platform was now moving.

-The enemies were just dissolve material and a paint switch. A better enemy is one with moving legs, and a few moving parts. To make it possible for an enemy to be killed by the paintinator all you have to do is set the paint switch to one shot and attach it to the brain

I hope that helps. If you have any questions that can help I'll be glad to follow through on them.

2009-06-25 19:22:00

Author:
Waldo

Posts: 108

hey there.

Just got through your level and I'll be honest I only gave 2 stars as there are some issues that are easily fixable.

-There were spelling errors in speech bubbles. You have the internet to spellcheck for you. Even small errors in speech bubbles can make you level look amateurishly done

-The level was short. There were not a lot of creatures around not a lot of tech going on so your thermo must be empty. FILL THAT THING UP!

-The boss was insanely easy. All you had to do was stand behind the pillar and it wasn't able to reach you, and after killing it you could just jump off the level and hit the floor. All you had to do was add a layer of gas there and made it a little more obvious that a platform was now moving.

-The enemies were just dissolve material and a paint switch. A better enemy is one with moving legs, and a few moving parts. To make it possible for an enemy to be killed by the paintinator all you have to do is set the paint switch to one shot and attach it to the brain

I hope that helps. If you have any questions that can help I'll be glad to follow through on them.

Thanks for the feedback and acctually it was overheated, a lot!

I went back through and made the boss harder. I changed any spelling errors I could find and added some more enemies and some new ones.

If you mind replaying it and tell me what you think of it now.

2009-06-25 21:31:00

Author:
pikmin08

Posts: 7

i played the level again and there was one thing that messed the entire level mess up. When you go down into the sewers, after destroying the robots the ground gets messed up and dissappears making the entire level worthless. i would try to find a way to fix that or else everyone who plays it will rate it bad.

2009-06-26 05:20:00

Author:
bbdogdude

Posts: 37

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