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A Rock Adventure

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Hey Guys, I've just published a new level called A Rock Adventure. Its a tribute level to one of my favourite films called 'The Rock'... hopefully you will have seen it.
I would love for you guys to give it a go and let me know what you think

My PSN is Blade_2008 and the title again is A Rock Adventure

Here are some pics so you can get a glimpse of it
http://i569.photobucket.com/albums/ss140/jennimartin28/APhoto_112.jpg

http://i569.photobucket.com/albums/ss140/jennimartin28/APhoto_111.jpg

http://i569.photobucket.com/albums/ss140/jennimartin28/APhoto_110-1.jpg

Thank You
2009-06-06 15:50:00

Author:
LLBP
Posts: 5


okay its feedback time:

+looked nice
+everything was very easy to follow I always knew what I was meant to do
+good use of story telling
+the helicopter jump at the start into the water was very cool

-far too easy, I wasn't in any danger of dying at any point
- perhaps better positioning of jetpacks so that you get them as soon as you enter the water areas
- it was also not clear at all that you had to grab the top of the monitor, I only worked this out by fluke.

other than that pretty cool level, I liked your use of characters.
2009-06-06 16:38:00

Author:
groble
Posts: 223


Thats great! thank you so much for the feedback i will look at your comments and make some changes! Thanks for trying it!! Much appreciated 2009-06-06 16:40:00

Author:
LLBP
Posts: 5


Thats great! thank you so much for the feedback i will look at your comments and make some changes! Thanks for trying it!! Much appreciated

they were only minor changes becuase on the whole it was a pretty good level, if not a bit easy.
2009-06-06 16:59:00

Author:
groble
Posts: 223


Yeah I added the jetpack, funnily enough I did originally have one but I removed it for some reason.... but thanks. Yeah, its easy but I cant do much about that now... its for a contest and the deadline is today and thermo is maxed out. Thanks for the feedback tho

Hi, sorry to double post

Would really appreciate it if anyone else would be able to take a look and give some feedback? I'm happy to also give feedback on some levels. I dont want to seem like I'm just take take take....

Thanks Guys
2009-06-06 17:09:00

Author:
LLBP
Posts: 5


When I saw the title I immediately went "RockSauron, A rock Adventure" But I saw that I was wrong. Looks great I'll probably play it later.2009-06-07 17:03:00

Author:
Sage
Posts: 2068


Some spelling mistakes -
gonner -> goner
diffuse ('being spread out&apos-> defuse (to remove the fuse from)

Yeah, I'm a word-Nazi. I can't help it. ;..;

I have to say I really, really don't care for stairs that I have to bunny-hop up (ahemlighthouse). X, X, X, X, X, X, X, X, X just gets really tiring after a while.
I also had a hard time getting out the top of the lighthouse; I had to stand in the middle of the top step (instead of at the very right side of it) 'cause I kept bashing my head against the ceiling. Might consider sloping that bit so it at least knocks you over to the right place to jump up.

Decently fun, even if it was a bit easy. I liked the soldiers' conversation at the spinning fire, it made me laugh. At the spinning platforms, I just jumped down and held left; didn't have to land on a single platform
2009-06-09 23:08:00

Author:
Loius
Posts: 342


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