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House Tour (PICS)

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This level is a tour around an imaginary house. There are many funny facts about things in the house. I hope you guys have as much fun playing it as I had creating it.

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=436&pictureid=3936

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=436&pictureid=3937
2009-05-30 13:54:00

Author:
Sackdragon
Posts: 427


I think you did a nice job showing the viewer your home.
The things I liked were the comic book hero's picture, amusing text, moving notes by jukebox, "raiding" the refridgerator, the laundry chute drop into the basket and the washer/dryer.

May I would suggest:
Securing green recliner so it doesn't topple forward.
Sticker either the cat or the bed a different color so they are defined.
Maybe a different texture or color on the scratching post or kitty house to define them as separate pieces. (very good work on being able to tell what they are).
Some point bubbles hidden in the chest as a surprize for the explorer.

Weightroom: At first I thought the weights were bones. Maybe stickered would help clarify them.

Adding a teacup and changing the plate for the eggs to glass and stickering it would give a more realistic look to it.

The flowers in the laundry room seemed a bit out of place. Maybe if they were on a table under a window?

A possible bit of action- when you slide down the chute into the laundry room have the underware laying on the floor elsewhere. Make it grabbable. Sackboy/girl has to push it into the basket. That releases some surprize for them.

I didn't really understand why u had the cheetah blow up at the end but that's just me.

Overall I thought it was a cute level, well done but needs a bit more decorations.
2009-06-03 00:06:00

Author:
Lady_Luck__777
Posts: 3458


great level, very homely and has a pleasant feel to it. i thought the laundry part was funny and there were great effects for the different things inside the home, like the washing machine, refridgerator and furnace, etc.
like lady luck 777 above said the cat was same colour as the thing it was on. but i could tell it was cat for some reason before hearing the sound.
great design to most of the house, though some of it seemed empty, compared to your room.
might i suggest getting the treadmill to work? also the weights look like bones at first.
i hearted this level and gave 5 star (i think) cos i like the personalised design and dialogue
2009-06-06 19:30:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


Very nice little level, not exactely a new idea but a still nice.

Pros:
+ Good design of the house in general
+ Lots of different items in the house that wouldn't be in other similar levels
+ Funny speech bubbles
+ Raiding the fridge was pretty cool
+ Section with the laundry chute

Cons:
- A little bland in places
- Some things looked like one thing, perhaps different sticker colours?

Overall though a pretty level, 4 stars and "funky" tag
2009-06-07 20:12:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645


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