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hi everyone. ive been told from 2 very good creators that my new level is great and that i should joint lbp central so here i am. i dont know how to put screen shots in yet so for now its just writting. anyway my levels called project mercury and my online name is david1209 and basically you are recruited into an army and sent to the arctic to to travel through the snow and rock in search of an enemy base the are a number of movie like cutscenes in the level which was inspired by darkness bear.i dont want to give away to much i'll say no more. i've used just about every switch the paintinator global lighting switch and all the rest. it has taken me a long time to make so please play. oh and theres an epilogue to the cliff hanger ending too just search for project mercury: epilogue. i am also currently working on operation chimera part 2 of the series so stand by.

2009-05-29 15:51:00 Author: david1209 Posts: 17

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added to play list... some tips: - use F4F to get more, well.... feedback - give a little better description about the level so you can get the player a little hyped

2009-05-29 16:28:00 Author: blizzard_cool Posts: 752

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Spelling error in the first text dialogue (Neutralize not neutralise) Mike's bubble also has some errors... the first sentance needs some tweaking grammar wise, and "gary's by the fire" not "garys by the fir" lol Nice character design... though some of the scenery is random (columns in a frozen area? I like your lighting on the cliff/bridge area and the underground cave. Not to mention the look ;p The grab switch out feels slow. More spelling errors... you're shooting his head "off" not "of". I'm also noticing gramattical errors like the first letter of the sentance not being capitalized. Visible key switch on the scaffold. "defense" not "defence" >.> The leader boss is a nice design... a tad easy though. Not sure why i'm destroying a generator... or why the place is on fire after that. you might want to explain that. Visible key on the persons leg. That chopper wreckage looks cool. Overall, theres some good design there, but nothing really new gameplay wise, and the grammar errors really detract to me. 3*

2009-05-29 17:02:00 Author: Burnvictim42 Posts: 3322

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