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Massive Awesome Level (includes pictures and a video!)

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PSN: MarkoWolfy
Where?: In the Middle East
Name: Massive Awesome Level

Nail biting action, super sneaky stealth, and karmic decisions!
This is Massive Awesome Level!
A gripping story, (don't want to tell any spoilers ) a ruined city and an army base!
I'm willing to take feedback because I think there are a few bugs, but I want others to see if they are bugs. Thanks!

I want you to play because it's a really fun level (my friends say) that I spent 30 hours on and hearts may be my only payment. It'll take you 10 minutes to finish, but it's a 10 minutes you'll love! I added a good or evil decision for replay value, (3 items for each side! ) and it's just awesome blowing up stuff anyway!

Feedback for feedback! I'm doing it!
Sceenshots
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=192&pictureid=3713

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=192&pictureid=3712

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=192&pictureid=3714

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=192&pictureid=3715

VIDEO: Don't watch if you don't like spoilers!
YouTube - Massive Awesome Level (LittleBigPlanet level)		2009-05-25 14:08:00

Author:
MarkoWolfy
Posts: 445

looks good ill check it out2009-05-25 15:57:00

Author:
Sonic5411
Posts: 712

Ok, checked this out and I was impressed at how fun and imaginative the level was.

Pros:
+ The starting race through a ruined city - very nice idea.
+ Really looks like a war has gone on
+ Nice design
+ Good ideas
+ Lots of different types of gameplay
+ Solid platforming

Cons:
-Sometimes the different layers are hard to distinguise and get in the way of the platforming

Overall though a very fun level - rated it 5 stars 		2009-05-25 16:01:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645

Thanks so far, i'll fix it in a bit! 2009-05-25 16:07:00

Author:
MarkoWolfy
Posts: 445

Overall its a pretty good level.
Pros
-good solid story
-fun platforming
-good or evil choice
Cons
-some spotlights dont trigure anything
-global tool shouldnt be visible
-race part: to many things get in the way

I gave it a 3 star		2009-05-25 16:29:00

Author:
Sonic5411
Posts: 712

Overall its a pretty good level.
Pros
-good solid story
-fun platforming
-good or evil choice
Cons
-some spotlights dont trigure anything
-global tool shouldnt be visible
-race part: to many things get in the way

I gave it a 3 star

yeah, i thought there were bugs! i'll fix them tonight.		2009-05-25 17:05:00

Author:
MarkoWolfy
Posts: 445

I really liked the style of the ruins and the changed into the base. But things were a little cramped at times. And like the others said, I think there were too many visible global and music switches. There were also parts of the level where everything was a bit too cramped, like the amoo section and the neon green section. Do you think you could open up the space a bit? Other than that I liked the level and wish you good luck with it!
4stars/ Perilous

F4F? CAn you do my Level In my sig below? I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!		2009-05-25 19:52:00

Author:
Noroibito
Posts: 211

That was one massive awesome level!

The beginning of the level was a good introduction, and some very pretty scenery, that made it look war-torn. The race was fun, and had some great platforming. Then when you got into the military base, it looked quite cool, and was really different from outside, which is good. I liked how outside it was platforming, inside it was sneaking, and then in the VR place, it was shooting! That made it much better! There was some difficulty in the level, but that was fine, and made it better. I died a couple times but I made it passed everything, which is always good. Forgot to say how this level had a story, all good levels usually have to have some sort of a story, and yours did. When you had to choose what to do, that was great, and did bring replayability to the level!

Some things you might want to change/fix: At the start, it sounds as if someone is talking to you, I can't see them. There are numerous times when someone talks to you, but no one is there. Try adding someone. When you get to the landmines, it was quite hard to know were they where, so I died for every one. Maybe add some sticker on the ground, showing they are there, and lower the trigger radius. One thing that I always look for in a level is a good icon, yours wasn't that great, and probably won't be very eye catching. Try making the MAL symbol in a blank level, and make a coloured background, then take a picture of it. This was it would make it clearer. Finally, at one point your character says: "Sacktown! That's the biggest CITY in the world!" I thought that was weird how a town was the biggest city in the world. Maybe change it to Sackcity?

Overall the level was great, and fun to play!

5 stars and a heart from me!

Also, for F4F, could you do my Bouncing Balls - Survival Challenge level? Thanks!		2009-05-25 21:16:00

Author:
Kog
Posts: 2358

I played this earlier but when I got to the part where it says something about ammo and you have to jump up all the platforms I just found it impossible. It was really difficult to see the platforms for a start and I kept getting killed by the orange plasma balls even when I was standing on a platform.

I thought the danger was between platforms when jumping which would have been hard enough as there were loads of plasma balls everywhere, but to kill the player when they are standing on what should be a safe platform is just evil.		2009-05-26 03:48:00

Author:
mistervista
Posts: 2210

Looks interesting, will play if I have time.

Btw, "Massive Awesome Level" isn't exactly the best title. Maybe: "Urban Suspense" or something catchy.		2009-05-26 10:30:00

Author:
dkjestrup
Posts: 672

My Description-
I thought this level is really nice, it also had pretty good visuals.

Pros of the level-
Pretty Visuals is always a plus, you had the front, middle and back planes pretty well designed that it made it look good.

The platforming is pretty good.

Nice choice of material for the buildings and background.

Cons of the level-
There were a few interruptions on the race part of level.

I think there were 2 cut scenes that really takes alot of your time when your reading them, My advice is, its really a bad idea when you try to interrupt a player when he/she is trying the their best to get as many points as they can.

The Platforming part with the jet powered platforms and that you have to avoid plasma balls were quite confusing, because i found my self wondering which planes the plasma balls are firing. which just led me to trial ad error to be able to reach the top.

Overall Rating-

The level looks good. 4 stars and Platformer plus a heart.

Can i request a feedback for the level "The Count Of St Claire Prologue"

The thread is in my sig.		2009-05-27 18:31:00

Author:
graygoose
Posts: 371

Thanks everyone, just about to correct and do F4F now, hopefully play again when edit is done? Anyone? 2009-05-27 20:46:00

Author:
MarkoWolfy
Posts: 445


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