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Dawes & Rock's Make Your Own Adventure
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Well, Rock was bored, so I came up with the idea of making a story where we each alternate a paragraph. I'll post the story in spoilers of around 5-6 paragraphs each (or whenever there is a convenient time), so...here it goes. Paul sat on the deserted beach, looking out to sea. The large expanse of the uninhabited island stretched behind him, a mass of plants and sand. Five days he had sat there, waiting for a sign of human life, but nothing had come. He'd constructed a small shelter of some leaves draped over a stick-structure, and had lived off fruit and the occasional raw animal. Today was no different - papayas for breakfast and lunch (murder on the digestion), and hopefully some crab for dinner. All of a sudden, BAM! Two Brave Men with axes killed Paul! The Two Brave Men turned to each other and smiled. "Good job," they grinned at each other. "Now, what's for dinner." There was a moment of silence. Then they laughed heartily. "I know I know, we're cannibals, right?" They dragged the man off into the forest. Rake it away, Tock Take it away, Rock! EDIT: How do I delete this? | 2009-05-10 18:22:00 Author: dawesbr Posts: 3280 |
All of a sudden, BAM! Two Brave Men with axes killed Paul! ... Man, this is... stupid >_< | 2009-05-10 18:51:00 Author: RockSauron Posts: 10882 |
The Two Brave Men turned to each other and smiled. "Good job," they grinned at each other. "Now, what's for dinner." There was a moment of silence. Then they laughed heartily. "I know I know, we're cannibals, right?" They dragged the man off into the forest. C'mon Rock, this could be awesome! Write a bit more >.> | 2009-05-10 18:55:00 Author: dawesbr Posts: 3280 |
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