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Okay... NOT my first level.
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| The "My first level" thread was completely unsuccessful so I tried reverse psychology. Anyway, I'll just copy and paste... PSN: DeathJohnson Level: Random Race It doesn't really have a theme to it. It's basically just what the level is named. There are some enemies and secrets along the way too. I've republished it at least 5 times with some of the advice I got in other places and completely remade the ending at one point. I could use more advice though, I can't see how my other levels would be rated three if this one's only a two... Btw how do I delete my other thread? | 2009-05-05 20:43:00 Author: DeathJohnson  Posts: 57 |
I'll delete it for you. You can't until you get the Basic Bundle from the shop.  | 2009-05-05 21:19:00 Author: Killian  Posts: 2575 |
Ok. Only need 900 more experience. | 2009-05-05 21:59:00 Author: DeathJohnson Posts: 57 |
| I played your level and I have a few improvements to suggest. Pros: +Some nice enemy design +Some good use of Mm objects +The whole thing eing a race Cons: -A lot of decoration is needed -Way to much visile dark matter -Too many Mm items Overall I rated your level 2 Stars and tagged it repetetive, because it wasn't much fun. | 2009-05-06 17:23:00 Author: Coxy224  Posts: 2645 |
| I played your level and I have a few improvements to suggest. Pros: +Some nice enemy design Overall I rated your level 2 Stars and tagged it repetitive, because it wasn't much fun. I don't think I actually designed either of the two good enemy things there. The robot with the swinging arms was designed by my brother and the cannon things at the end I found from another level. The only ones I designed were the things with the flaming bodies and the giant freak with a huge torso made of gas that I made for the Dr.Frankenstein trophy and didn't delete for some reason. I just wish more people would rate my other levels ones. I made one so I could get a trophy and I made the other so other people could get trophies. | 2009-05-06 21:54:00 Author: DeathJohnson Posts: 57 |
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