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http://i709.photobucket.com/albums/ww98/narutard67/Mynarutofanfic.jpg Introduction The leaf village has been at war with the hidden village of rock and the hidden village of sand for five years .Many lives have been claimed and it's been four years sense the 6th hokage died. People are drafted to the ninja academy at twelve years old. When they are drafted they go into a six month program where they are brutally trained to be cold blooded ninjas. When they come out of the program they are no longer people they are shinobi tools. If they have not passed the program they are then put into a 2 year program of brutal training and brainwashing .The leaf village changed when the 6th hokage died. There is no chunin exams there is no ninja missions. As soon as they pass the program they are either shipped off to the earth country or the wind country. But one ninjas goal is to become hokage and end the war and change the leaf village to the way it was before the 6th died. His name is Nakutay Makuzon. Chapter 1 He woke up and looked at the time and said ?oh no its 5 to twelve.? He turned and said ?I?m out of time tomorrow I will leave the life I had to become a mindless tool of the leaf village?. He closed his eyes to be what seemed like a second to be awoken by a knock on the door. He heard his dads voice ?Okay he will leave at 1:00 pm.? He heard his dad sigh and he punched his wall. He felt blood trickle from his fist as tears rolled down his face. He got out of bed and got dressed ?So this is it the last day of my freedom? he said. He slipped on a clean shirt and put on some shorts ?I guess I will brush my teeth.?He opened a cabinet and pulled out a tooth brush. He turned on the water and rinsed off his tooth brush and began to brush his teeth. He brushed his hair and left the bathroom. He went into the kitchen and got a ramen out of the cabinet. He heated up some water and poured it in his ramen cup. He began to eat as he turned his head to look at the clock it said 10:30 am.?Nakutay!? His mother called. He yelled across the hall ?ya??His mother walked into the room ?Today is your big day? she said. His parents acted like nothing was wrong but he knew what the academy was like. He wasn?t stupid he had plenty of friends who went there. They returned completely different people. He said ?ya I know? he said as he suppressed his sad voice.?I?m going to go say good bye to all of my friends mom? ?ok? his mom said with a suppressed sad voice. He grabbed his bag off of the door handle and put it over his shoulder. ?Okay I?m off see ya? he said. He was walking up the sand street when he saw the recruiters. He ran and hid behind a dumpster it wasn?t 1:00 pm yet but he was just being careful. After they had passed by he began to walk back up the street. He saw his best friend and ran up to him ?hey Mofery ? Nakutay said to his Friend.?Hey Nakutay today is the day you leave hah? Mofery said.?Ya it sucks? ?why does it suck? Mofery said.?You don't know what the academy is like my brother went there he was never the same.? ?So what do u think the academy is like? his friend said.?I think it's a soul crushing brain washing program? Nakutay said.?That stinks I?m going there next month? Mofery said.?I have to leave in 2 hours? Nakutay said.?So what do you want to do Nakutay.? He turned his head and saw a library ?I want to do some research about the academy? Nakutay said. ?ok? said Mofery. They both started to walk up the sand street. They came to the front door and Mofery said ?What book are we looking for? ?Where not looking for a book.? Then why are we here? Mofery said . Nakutay didn?t answer. He opened the door and walked in an saw himself in a mirror. He looked terrible with his stringy blonde hair sticking up and gunk in his eyes but he didn?t care anymore. ?Hey Nakutay? Some one said while walking out from behind a door to the back room. The man from behind the door had old looking skin and grey hair he was blind in one eye and he walked with a limp.?Hey Gaudy how are you doing today? Nakutay said.?What brings you here today? Gaudy said.?I want to know more about the ninja academy.? ?oh!? Gaudy said ?Your twelve today aren?t you.? ?Yes I?m twelve now? ?Ok come in the back room where no one can here us? Gaudy said. ?Ok? Nakutay said. They walked in the back room. Awhile later ?Thank you for the info Gaudy? ?no problem Nakutay.? Nakutay And Mofery were walking back down the street.?Wow I didn?t know the academy was that way? Mofery said. Nakutay said nothing.?Nakutay? ?Nakutay? ?NAKUTAY!? ?Oh what sorry? ?Are you ok Nakutay? ?Ya I?m just taking it all in.? Mofery new Nakutay was scared. They came to Nakutays? house his parents were outside. It was now three minutes until one.?Nakutay the recruiters will be here in three minutes what took you so long.? A group of kids lead by three adults were heading down the street.?Those must be the recruiters? His mom said. He hugged his mom and dad goodbye. ?goodbye son his dad said.? Nakutay turned and started to walk towards the recruiters. He was scared but he suppressed his feelings. He didn?t know what was in store for him. But he knew it was bad. When he got to the recruiters he turned his head and a single tear ran down his face. He clutched his fist and thought to himself ?No matter what happens I will not change into a mindless tool? We wiped the tear away and stood strongly. They left To Be Continued. Hey guys leave feedback of any kind mean or nice. Tell me if I should continue the series or if it stunk and I should stop the series.

2009-05-05 14:05:00 Author: Narutard67 Posts: 13

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2009-05-05 14:21:00 Author: Narutard67 Posts: 13

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