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SALVATION! Introduction, and A Pirates Journey (Part.1) Videos included

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Try out my levels SALVATION! Introduction which is my first level and A Pirates Journey (Part.1) which is my second. I hope you enjoy my levels! Also send me feedback so I can fix and improve on my levels thanks!

My PSN is: speedydemon67

Here are videos I made on my levels.

SALVATION! Introduction
YouTube - LittleBigPlanet - SALVATION! introduction.

A Pirates Journey (Part.1)
YouTube - LittleBigPlanet - A Pirates Journey (PART.1)
2009-05-03 16:52:00

Author:
speedydemon67
Posts: 6


Ok, I just played SALVATION: Introduction, and have to say, it was great! (I'll edit this post with the Pirate level as I haven't played it yet.)

The beginning is great, and looks great. Every good level needs some sort of story, or a reason why the character is there or doing that. You did that. The detail looks great, everything is well done especially the rocks and such. The atmosphere is great and has a creepy vibe. The rocks crumbling and the fog really makes the place feel old and haunted. When you get into Salvation it looks good, and it works well with the MGS pack. The place gives just a creepy and alone feeling as outside did, which is great. I loved your enemies that had pop-up shields, those were great! You had a good variety of platforming and puzzles, and that was awesome. I wanted to know what happened to the guy in the cage though, he seemed to just disappear. Hopefully you put him into the next level! I liked the demon face on the wall, he was cool, but at the same time a bit weird and out of place. The ending wasn't that great, as it kinda just ended. But it was fine, as you are going to make more.

There were somethings that could be changed; Each elevator you went on was REALLY fast, and when it stopped, shot you into the air a bit. This was a bit weird, so maybe slow them down. The several keys you must place into the slots to turn on the power shouldn't be electric as they were annoying to carry, and sometimes killed you. Finally, when you have to grab the ceiling and dodge the spikes that go up and down, the grabbable material was really out of place, maybe make it out of polyester, or something that matches the theme, along with the section right after that, when you have to jump from wall to wall, and climb up.

Aside from that the level was great, and I am excited for the next in the series. I shall play the pirate level soon, probably now. Oh, I gave the level 5 stars and a heart!

For F4F, could you do my level; 'Bouncing Balls - Survival Challenge'? Thanks!
2009-05-04 03:14:00

Author:
Kog
Posts: 2358


I might play your levels if you stop spamming the comments section in my (and everyone else on the cool pages it seems) levels with the same message promoting your stuff.2009-05-04 03:27:00

Author:
Matt 82
Posts: 1096


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