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LBPC: Tactical Espionage Action

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You demanded another LBPC story, here it is, ripped straight out of MGS.

enjoy.

Index
Act I- Lone Soldier (http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_51f73v84g6)
Act II- The Mission Begins (http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_52fkbb99f7)
Act III- Faster then a Speeding Bullet (http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_53fnfcphgn)
Act IV- The Cavern of Win! (http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_55dzkdcn4f)
ACT V- Drunk as a Rabbit (http://docs.google.com/View?id=ds3929t_56cnhbr9ch)		2009-05-02 23:32:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

Haha, that was pretty cool.2009-05-02 23:39:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079

Ryan is Snake, Cartman is the Colonel, and Code is Otacon?

But, Are0blue as the S.O.P.? That's odd.		2009-05-03 00:57:00

Author:
Astrosimi
Posts: 2046

Oh my god... i actually laughed out loud xD Oh dear... hahaha. Btw i did read the whole of your other story...actually ill comment over there.2009-05-03 02:57:00

Author:
ryryryan
Posts: 3767

"That doesn't matter," Cartman interrupted. "Now, during this operation, Code andI will be assisting you via Codec. However, we need new names so as to make it more awesome... Ok, I'll be Codename CC, Code will be codename Code1337, and you, Ryan will be codename ryryryan."

"Wow, how original," the newly dubbed ryryryan facepalm.

I loled, this new story is awesome.		2009-05-03 05:42:00

Author:
Code1337
Posts: 3476

Nice start to another story! You're so good at making stories based around LBPC. And that was pretty funny too.2009-05-03 12:48:00

Author:
lk9988
Posts: 1077

Aw, you shoulda made me Ottercon! Or Otterlet.2009-05-03 13:59:00

Author:
qrtda235566
Posts: 3664

Yeah, I made chapter 2. Read it.2009-05-03 23:38:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

That one was cool, I love the way you make it half story, half reality; they pretty much do that in MGS. O_O2009-05-04 01:21:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079

Haha, great update. Loved the digs to the MGS guards xD2009-05-04 21:43:00

Author:
ryryryan
Posts: 3767

I loved it.. Can I subscribe, like last time?2009-05-08 07:49:00

Author:
TheArmedReaper
Posts: 1543

Hmmm..."LBPC: TEA"? Earl grey, maybe?2009-05-08 17:06:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280

Again, that was a nice chapter. The nicknames are funny.2009-05-09 21:44:00

Author:
lk9988
Posts: 1077

Anymore chapters?2009-05-10 15:10:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079

Anymore chapters?

I kinda need to think about where I'm going with this... like I need to plan who the main baddie is or whatever. :/		2009-05-10 15:13:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

I kinda need to think about where I'm going with this... like I need to plan who the main baddie is or whatever. :/

Lil Pingin? xD
Nah, kiddding.		2009-05-10 15:21:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079

eh, in the meantime, Chapter III is up.2009-05-10 15:32:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

In Chapter 2, is this intentional:

"Hey," said one to the other, "Zwollie, did you see someone?"

"Yes I did," Silverleon nodded.

(notice the names?)

As for the last chapter, I have no clue. Poor Yarbone. But seriously, WTH was with Code and Thee Flash etc.?		2009-05-10 15:41:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280

In Chapter 2, is this intentional:

"Hey," said one to the other, "Zwollie, did you see someone?"

"Yes I did," Silverleon nodded.

(notice the names?)

As for the last chapter, I have no clue. Poor Yarbone. But seriously, WTH was with Code and Thee Flash etc.?

um... yeah, of course using their names was intentional :/

and the scene with Code was a joke off Drebin telling you the orgin of each B&B member after you kill them.		2009-05-10 15:42:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

Rock, I mean that Zwollie turned into Silverleon.2009-05-10 15:46:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280

Rock, I mean that Zwollie turned into Silverleon.

uh...

uh...

um...

... This is a MAGIC show.

...

/runs		2009-05-10 15:49:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

That chapter rawked, I remember suffering from the long stories that no-one cares about in MGS4.2009-05-10 15:53:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079

Loool! I made a kind of a short appearance xD2009-05-10 16:50:00

Author:
Yarbone
Posts: 3036

So wait... does that mean I'm out of the story now?2009-05-10 17:02:00

Author:
Code1337
Posts: 3476

So wait... does that mean I'm out of the story now?

there will be a cheap plot device to force ryan into getting another Codec. I'll think of how :/		2009-05-10 17:14:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

Code: You AREN'T dead. Just Codec-less.

HAHA OH WOW Code-c.		2009-05-10 17:18:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280

LOL, Drebin rant.

I remember fast forwarding through those. It took me 2 minutes of valuable gametime.		2009-05-11 01:00:00

Author:
Astrosimi
Posts: 2046

Hey! MY PS3 broke too! I see you don't care, Rock. 2009-05-14 00:01:00

Author:
qrtda235566
Posts: 3664

Hey! MY PS3 broke too! I see you don't care, Rock.

FINE, i'll have you shoot yourself in the face NEXT chapter...

EDIT: Wait, I can't do that... You're Ottercon, you're important to the story :O		2009-05-14 00:02:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

Ah! I forgot to check up on this! Been caught up with revision. OH MY GOD LULZ. Just read chapter 3. It truly is hilarious. Particularly Yarbone's awesome role in it hahaha. If you want me to get a new codec, you could introduce meryl (well, named someone else) and give me one. Or something. Still, great chapter xD2009-05-18 22:30:00

Author:
ryryryan
Posts: 3767

I probably should make chapter 4 soon... hm...2009-05-18 22:36:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

lol, nice LBPC/MGS mixture.
(And i made an appereance! )

Wait, am i appearing later in the story? or was i just a regular guard...? 		2009-05-19 00:03:00

Author:
Silverleon
Posts: 6707

Chapter 4 is up- see for yourself :kz:

No more till I get home from Disney, probably .		2009-05-19 02:05:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

lol, nice.
(And i made another appereance! )

Oh, btw, you got a typo:
HalfaSack devoured the HamSalad, and ryryryan could stand the stench no mroe - he fell.
Just letting you know.		2009-05-19 02:27:00

Author:
Silverleon
Posts: 6707

chapter 4 was funny2009-05-19 09:41:00

Author:
Don Vhalt
Posts: 2270

Err..... am I the only one who noticed this?



The Cavern of Win had no traps, no guards, nothing... it was just... WIN. there was no way to understand such win in a lifetime...

ryryryan gasped, and jumped on the roof. There was a guard coming.		2009-05-19 14:27:00

Author:
Astrosimi
Posts: 2046

Err..... am I the only one who noticed this?

There WAS not guards... Then a guard ENTERED.

See, there's this wonderful thing called time... Depending on the time, even if it is merely a few seconds, a room can have no one OR someone could enter in that amount of time.		2009-05-19 20:22:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

There WAS not guards... Then a guard ENTERED.

See, there's this wonderful thing called time... Depending on the time, even if it is merely a few seconds, a room can have no one OR someone could enter in that amount of time.


Ok, then, that could have been clarified a bit...

ANYWAYS, nice chapter. Keep on writing so I may amuse myself. >=D		2009-05-20 15:45:00

Author:
Astrosimi
Posts: 2046

This chapter is as win as the cavern which it contains.2009-05-20 18:04:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280

That was a hilarious chapter! That cavern of win was so full of win...2009-05-24 22:33:00

Author:
lk9988
Posts: 1077

D'oh! Wrote chapter 5 earlier today, and forgot to update this topic XD Was wondering why no one was responding O_o

... Anyway, chapter 5 is now included, so... yeah		2009-05-30 22:29:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882

Nice!!

I just started reading this today only to find out I'm in it.
So Silverleon, wanna go hang out after this? 		2009-05-30 22:35:00

Author:
Zwollie
Posts: 2173

Haha, oh The Rock, you so evil, man!2009-05-31 15:15:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280

Got round to reading this. LOL. awesome new chapters 2009-06-06 16:51:00

Author:
ryryryan
Posts: 3767

I just read it too!

OTTERCON!		2009-06-06 18:13:00

Author:
qrtda235566
Posts: 3664

How the hell have I completely missed this whole new series

Just read through all 5 chapters and great work as usual Rock 		2009-06-06 19:55:00

Author:
dorien
Posts: 2767


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