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Deserts and a Fctory

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PSN: Nizard

Whats up Lbp community,

Here are a few levels that have completed

Operation Sandstorm: The Assault,

You are Michel "Sack" Francis, Special Ops, and you have been asked to join an elite team.You and your team will fly into hostile territory to quickly aprehend Al-Shumed: Head of Little Big Terror Unit. After jumping out of a helicopter you must sneak past a few guards but dont think your in the clear, they know your there. This is one of three levels I am creating for this series.

Tired of fighting off bad guys? Well then how about you try this quick Survial mini-game!

Bomb Sort,

"All is well at the Little Big Bomb Factory until the man who sorts the bombs out is sick. Can seperate the bombs so the factory wont explode."
Objective is simple, seperate the black bombs from the reds. (Remeber though you cant let any slip by.) <-- subject to change.
2009-04-30 15:03:00

Author:
Nizard
Posts: 1


You should probably add some images to your post. It makes it more appealing.

here are my thoughts, and some things i noticed:

Sandstorm:
First off, your credits are a little off- i never fully saw either title, maybe use a camera zone? The map was kinda cute The helicopters main rotor is kind of hard to see, and that makes it look odd IMO.
You also need to fix that guy who lifts you up. It breaks after you use it, and restarting is a pain. At the start you're supposed to take out the guard... why can't i kill him then? The level seemed like it would be a lot longer than it actually was based on the intro cutscene. Did you really run out of thermo already? o.o

Bomb:

Not bad, though i'm not entirely sure why sorting the bombs is important... I feel the bombs stack up a little too fast, and if you look at your high scores you'll probably agree. You might want to consider using the tetherless jetpack at the beginning instead, as you can run into the jetpack with the bombs.

tell me if you make any changes, and i'll play em again.
2009-05-01 04:38:00

Author:
Burnvictim42
Posts: 3322


Sandstorm: Bit short. But an interesting plotline. You should continue it. And the tank could use a little tweaking. The first and third forms were a bit easy.

Bomb: They definately come out too fast too soon. Slow down whatever device you're using for difficulty increasing so that it's not that short?
2009-05-01 04:50:00

Author:
DJLols
Posts: 217


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