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Vengeance be thy name

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This is a new level i threw together today inspired by the seakitten collective video about sackboy coming into the real world

http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu197/kockle/APhoto.jpg
The end of the world is nigh

http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu197/kockle/APhoto_1.jpg
can anyone guess who this famous face belongs to answers on a postcard...

thanks in advance
2009-04-28 21:54:00

Author:
kockle
Posts: 22


For a level made in a day, this is pretty detailed! Especially what happens to the Earth after Sackboy gets his revenge!

I would suggest polishing it up a bit more by closing off the rest of the level, adding some more point combos, etc and you'll have a funny and fun level.
2009-04-28 22:17:00

Author:
mrsupercomputer
Posts: 1335


It`s really quite well done. Although it could do with a bit of humour and story added in. All we get is the speech bubble at the start, then we`re told we`re going to blow up the earth.

How about having loads of attempts to get the guy while he`s sleeping that something always goes wrong, then as you`re left with no choice you jump into the spaceship?

Also, you can fall off the right hand side of the moon and out of the level.

Anyway, I gave you 5 stars and a heart just for the design of the sleeper and the exploding earth.
2009-04-28 22:19:00

Author:
Matt 82
Posts: 1096


It`s really quite well done. Although it could do with a bit of humour and story added in. All we get is the speech bubble at the start, then we`re told we`re going to blow up the earth.

How about having loads of attempts to get the guy while he`s sleeping that something always goes wrong, then as you`re left with no choice you jump into the spaceship?

Also, you can fall off the right hand side of the moon and out of the level.

Anyway, I gave you 5 stars and a heart just for the design of the sleeper and the exploding earth.


i like the idea of having loads of attempts to kill the guy but the thremometer was pretty full i mess around with it tomorrow see if i have enough space to put this in
thanks again
2009-04-28 22:27:00

Author:
kockle
Posts: 22


Cute level. It felt kind of short to me, but you had some nice effects there which made up for it. I'd definitely replay if you ever added other failed attempts to kill the silly sleeper. You might want to get a PS Eye picture for the little big planet box... i know there are a ton floating out there.

Certainly not a bad level for a days work!
2009-04-29 08:50:00

Author:
Burnvictim42
Posts: 3322


ive now changed some of the problems with the level and republished it but unfortunately i coulndt put in multiple attempts to kill the guy due to the thermometer filling up and i also tried to find a ps eyetoy picture of the game case but couldnt find one so if anyone has one it would be appreciated if you could send me it and ill make sure to give credit on the level to you

thanks
2009-04-29 16:32:00

Author:
kockle
Posts: 22


I liked this level. It was unique. There were a couple of time I couldn't figure out what to do next, (grabbing the fly), but i figured them out soon enough and it really didn't effect my experience of the level.

4 stars, and a "great" tag
2009-04-29 23:32:00

Author:
ApellesJr
Posts: 282


I liked this level. It was unique. There were a couple of time I couldn't figure out what to do next, (grabbing the fly), but i figured them out soon enough and it really didn't effect my experience of the level.

4 stars, and a "great" tag

what no heart?

im kidding thanks for the feedback
2009-05-02 00:00:00

Author:
kockle
Posts: 22


Hey Kockle, I played your level a fews days ago and I really liked it.

Some neat visual treats in this level:

* The nutcracker kicking the books and the eventual consequence was funny.
* Earth exploding was really well done and really surprised me!!

Perhaps a little on the short side but besides that, a great level!!

I gave it 4 stars and a heart!!
2009-05-02 04:22:00

Author:
Zwollie
Posts: 2173


thanks zwollie
i glad you got that it ws a nutcracker its not too well made

the part with the earth exploding took me about 3 hours too get right

i was hoping to make it longer i had a few more interesting ideas for it but the thermo filled up too quickly

maybe ill make a part 2 where sackboy decides to destroy the rest of the universe
2009-05-03 13:03:00

Author:
kockle
Posts: 22


Checked it out last night and it's cute and disturbing all at the same time. LOL

The style is pretty simple but for a level built in a day it's amazing. I LOVE the fly. He's cute and a really interesting choice for a lift. The book/nutcracker thing is funny. The hammer is both funny and disturbing for me. I'm too sensitive I guess. Couple of things with this section - If you jump down before the hammer falls you can see the piston changing out the face and the snoring continues after he's dead.

The rocket was nicely designed (you can see dark matter on the piston lifting it up though) and the set up for the gun was really cool. Reminded me of the old cartoon with Marvin the Martian trying to blow up earth. I love the earth exploding effect too.

One thing I did notice is if you choose not to blow up earth and ride the lift up - the scoreboard lowered then raised up again so you can see some of the dark matter holding stuff up.

For a one day level it's impressive. I gave it 4 stars. Thanks for sharing it.
2009-05-03 21:47:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


thanks for the feedback2009-05-03 23:31:00

Author:
kockle
Posts: 22


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