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The haunted mine

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Behold my newest level! The Haunted Mine! You must make your way through the mine, solving some puzzles and simply getting out alive.

It's my first larger level, and I know I need a little more decor, but that will all be added in due course.

The level is called 'The Haunted Mine', though you need to play a level called 'Beta tester initiation' to get the key.

Due to the darkness of the level, I can't get pictures to work, so if anyone wants to take some, feel free, it would be greatly appreciated.

PSN: Goaliekid
2009-04-26 19:20:00

Author:
InsanityV2
Posts: 30


ill play both youre levels, but can you post youre psn?2009-04-26 19:31:00

Author:
gofurr360z
Posts: 886


ill play both youre levels, but can you post youre psn?

Yep, it's Goaliekid.

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2009-04-26 19:35:00

Author:
InsanityV2
Posts: 30


ah, i didnt even see that :O2009-04-26 19:38:00

Author:
gofurr360z
Posts: 886


Thoughts as I'm playing through just now.

- It`s too dark. You can`t take pics and I can`t see where I am unless I change into neon clothes.
- There are alot of empty spaces. I'm doing a lot of walking, not alot of much else.
- The mine cart hit a jaggy and flipped so had to walk.
- The music is a bizarre choice for a haunted mine. It`s a bouncy tune played on the flute.
- The second mine cart is almost impossible to see. I landed in it by accident.
-The puzzle part is a bit out of place and hard to do as you often end up knocking the ball out of the holder when you jump out of it.
- On the whole, there is very little to do. I can only think of one part that involved any sort of platforming. You definitely need to add stuff in.
- There were no ghosts. It was a haunted mine with a broken bridge and a mine cart.

While I think you have the basis for a good level ie level shape and progression, it doesn`t feel anywhere near finished yet.
2009-04-26 19:41:00

Author:
Matt 82
Posts: 1096


Thoughts as I'm playing through just now.

- It`s too dark. You can`t take pics and I can`t see where I am unless I change into neon clothes.
- There are alot of empty spaces. I'm doing a lot of walking, not alot of much else.
- The mine cart hit a jaggy and flipped so had to walk.
- The music is a bizarre choice for a haunted mine. It`s a bouncy tune played on the flute.
- The second mine cart is almost impossible to see. I landed in it by accident.
-The puzzle part is a bit out of place and hard to do as you often end up knocking the ball out of the holder when you jump out of it.
- On the whole, there is very little to do. I can only think of one part that involved any sort of platforming. You definitely need to add stuff in.
- There were no ghosts. It was a haunted mine with a broken bridge and a mine cart.

While I think you have the basis for a good level ie level shape and progression, it doesn`t feel anywhere near finished yet.

Which music part? Where were you when that played? For some reason music doesn't play on my system, so I don't know.

Thanks for the feedback, really helpful!
2009-04-26 19:47:00

Author:
InsanityV2
Posts: 30


i completely agree with matt

either way, rated 3 stars, and tagged 'funky' XD
2009-04-26 19:48:00

Author:
gofurr360z
Posts: 886


Which music part? Where were you when that played? For some reason music doesn't play on my system, so I don't know.

Thanks for the feedback, really helpful!


It was when the mine cart crashed. It soon changed to the Cries in the Wind, which suited it better, but for haunted stuff I would go with a variation of the wedding theme myself.

Anyway if it`s not too much trouble, I`m still doing final checks on my level, Eddy Mitter so if you could give that a run through and check for bugs it`d be appreciated.
2009-04-26 19:55:00

Author:
Matt 82
Posts: 1096


eddy mitter is published? *runs to play it*2009-04-26 19:58:00

Author:
gofurr360z
Posts: 886


Still in 'Beta' at the moment.

I`ll do it properly next week.
2009-04-26 20:04:00

Author:
Matt 82
Posts: 1096


Did you take the level down? I can't find it by your PSN or the level title.2009-04-30 08:22:00

Author:
phort
Posts: 74


Which music part? Where were you when that played? For some reason music doesn't play on my system, so I don't know.

Thanks for the feedback, really helpful!

Can't hear music?
Perhaps you have the sound off.
Just go to settings in the pause menu - Sound settings - And check that both sounds for pod and levels are on.
2009-04-30 09:00:00

Author:
Silverleon
Posts: 6707


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