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Ghostly Story Reviews

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As you've probably noticed, the amount of stories being posted in this sub-forum is starting to rise; yet not enough.

So, I began to think for a while, working out what would encourage people to post some more stories here and whatnot and then I came up with the idea: 'Reviews'. I had a feeling that if people were guaranteed detailed feedback, they'd want to post their writing more frequently, so I decided that I could run this.


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Simply post the name of your story to get started!


Waiting List:

Dawesbr - Evolution = Reviewed
Rocksauron - LBPC: The Villain = Reviewed
Cog - The Unknown
Dawesbr - Bits and Bobs
CreateNPlay - Wings of Speed
Hamsalad - Undead Hope
Pillaysteven - Hunted
2009-04-26 16:17:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079


Interesting! Could you do my Story thus far, Evolution? I keep posting Chapters when I can, so I'll probably post here to ask you to review each new one. Anywho, yeah, check it out please 2009-04-26 16:22:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280


My story :kz:

Just who IS the vet killer? :eek:
2009-04-26 16:24:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882


I'll get right on it.

EDIT: Evolution - Reviewed

I'll be reviewing yours later on today, Rock; don't worry.
2009-04-26 16:26:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079


Ah, very cool, could you do my story 'The Unknown'? Thank you.2009-04-26 17:05:00

Author:
Kog
Posts: 2358


Oh yeah, could you also do all of these:

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=9956

I know it's a bit much, but that's actually schoolwork that I need to learn from for my GCSEs, so feedback is actually pretty important
2009-04-26 17:40:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280


Can you review my story please.

Thanks
2009-04-26 22:50:00

Author:
CreateNPlay
Posts: 1266


want to do my story should be easy since you've read it already haha. at least what i have so far2009-04-27 05:18:00

Author:
Hamsalad
Posts: 2551


Right, from now on, even if I know it could you guys please actually post the name of your story please? It saves me from having to search around for it. 2009-04-27 15:15:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079


Could ya do my one - "Hunted"

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=10556
2009-04-27 18:27:00

Author:
Burrich
Posts: 1018


My story Wings Of Speed Please.

Thanks.
2009-04-28 16:20:00

Author:
CreateNPlay
Posts: 1266


Right, I apologise guys, but I'm not sure I have much time for this - Perhaps one of you should make a reviewing thread?2009-04-28 21:40:00

Author:
Bear
Posts: 2079


I already read 90% of threads (Sorry I haven't done yours yet, CnP.)2009-04-28 22:03:00

Author:
dawesbr
Posts: 3280


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