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my 2 levels... F4F yo!

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psn: megablob
levels:
forest jumping challenge
hunt for lord dread: caves of doom

be sure to leave feedback so i can get to play your levels!
2009-04-09 03:12:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


i did not know ****zle was a swear.....2009-04-09 03:14:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


Okay, played it:

The UP! Jumping Challenge looked really nice in the beginning especially in the forest area.

but then the visuals went from nice to sort of dull when you begin ascending the floating rocks, (there were a good amount of visual dark matters spread through out)

The gameplay is simple enough and adding the timer kept it interesting. This is good for competitive players.

Good choice of music.

Overall the level was worth a play and i gave it 3 stars and good.

Suggestions:

- add some point bubbles and a few more of your enemies.
- hide those Dark Matter
- add a sort of a slide coming from the finish line leading towards the scoreboard.
2009-04-09 07:20:00

Author:
graygoose
Posts: 371


I played both. here are my comments. (P.S. I don't have any published levels yet so dont worry)

"Up! Jumping Challenge"

Overall Rating 6.5/10

Textures 10/10 - I liked the textures alot and they fitted into the scene well.

Gameplay 5/10 - The gameplay could be sloppy and misdirecting. It made me nearly quit.

Fun 6/10 - Fairly fun level. A nice walk in the park

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"Caves Of Doom"

Overall Rating 8/10

Textures 10/10 - Great texturing along with the lighting. Good ambient design.

Gameplay 7/10 - Good gameplay with a fun boss and well thought out ideas.

Fun 8/10 - Fun level to play i well reccomend this great level.
2009-04-09 11:58:00

Author:
CreateNPlay
Posts: 1266


thanks for your reviews guys! i think i already played mg karas before... i'll give you feedback now..2009-04-09 14:34:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


Metal Gear Karas:

i couldnt find a tag for EPIC..
it was really good i was well impressed at how you fitted all that into the level. i love metal gear and there was agreat atmosphere, i especially like the vents

graphics 5/5
music 5/5
gameplay 4/5

i had played before but quit while the key got destroyed, it really annoyed me cos that part was quite tricky. did you fix it? cos this time round it was less tricky. i think that was the part that would deter most people after dragging the key half way and having it smushed.

also "dont shoot the rockets or the level will break" you fixed this my indicating to shoot the pilot in the plane, but i think you should say the rockets are on the front plane aswell.
2009-04-09 15:26:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


ah. now i have a level you can rate..

Search my name or The Best Level Ever

yeh i know it's clich? but it's my first level...
2009-04-09 16:46:00

Author:
CreateNPlay
Posts: 1266


so...
The Best Level Ever...
short and sweet, the visuals are a bit messy in parts but nothing ugly about them.

it could do with a cleaning or spicing of the visuals, and lengthening of the level, its very short

the slidy rail thing at the start- you could make a mechanism so that it could be resused
2009-04-09 17:57:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


I could but i can't 2009-04-09 18:06:00

Author:
CreateNPlay
Posts: 1266


Megablob - probably a good idea to do your reviews of other's levels in their level thread. (so, go put the "Metal Gear Karas" feedback into the "Metal Gear Karas" showcase thread).2009-04-09 19:04:00

Author:
CCubbage
Posts: 4430


ok will do thanks, i'm new here used to other forums2009-04-09 19:13:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


I can check out your levels possibly this weekend, if you could, check out my level too.

Here is a link to the post. LBPGolfNA - Driving Range (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=10225)

Thanks !

-Tony
2009-04-10 04:04:00

Author:
tonhe98
Posts: 15


Metal Gear Karas:

i couldnt find a tag for EPIC..
it was really good i was well impressed at how you fitted all that into the level. i love metal gear and there was agreat atmosphere, i especially like the vents

graphics 5/5
music 5/5
gameplay 4/5

i had played before but quit while the key got destroyed, it really annoyed me cos that part was quite tricky. did you fix it? cos this time round it was less tricky. i think that was the part that would deter most people after dragging the key half way and having it smushed.

also "dont shoot the rockets or the level will break" you fixed this my indicating to shoot the pilot in the plane, but i think you should say the rockets are on the front plane aswell.

Im glad my efforts to make the level more enjoyable but still offer a good challenge was successful.. GOOD JOB! for beating it.. its is too bad there isnt an EPIC tag.

Thanks for the feedback.
2009-04-10 06:31:00

Author:
graygoose
Posts: 371


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